Author Topic: A story I've worked on! (Read 120704 times)

Pirate Cortez · « **Reply #165 on:** July 11, 2005, 12:12:18 am »

That gets a RSJ/10

Bladegash · « **Reply #166 on:** July 11, 2005, 09:56:57 am »

Devil May Kart / 5-0

Swiftman · « **Reply #167 on:** July 11, 2005, 09:38:39 pm »

Thanks! I don't know what they all mean, but so long as it's not bad, it's grood! I mean good. and great. good and great.

Swiftman · « **Reply #168 on:** July 12, 2005, 04:10:59 am »

So, I have a severe case of writers block this week. I'll have to rewrite what I already have started for the next portion from scratch. Bleh. Oh weel. It wasn't that great anyways.

Trigger · « **Reply #169 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:13:09 am »

You say this LESS then a week after your last update? o_O

Swiftman · « **Reply #170 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:14:19 am »

Yeah. I don't wanna do the standard Deus Ex Machina for Deccus, but I don't want him to be crippled or anything again either. Look at what he's in now. Any suggestions without using some old style of escape?

Trigger · « **Reply #171 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:17:01 am »

I say he pulls uot a grapple-hook, and fires it and swings off into the night.

But that wouldn't work, so that's a no.

I say...he freezes to death.

But that would suck, so that's a no.

I say...ANOTHER hot gir, who happens to be swedish, living in a cottage somwhere, finds him and take him and Delia home to save them.

The only semi-problem I see with THAT would be finding out how they get their food to survive.

All of my idea's suck. Sorry....

Swiftman · « **Reply #172 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:21:47 am »

It's alright. Anything is appreciated.

I thought have Venra, Allouette and co. out looking for Delia through Clash's orders, and since Deccus is covered in snow he hears everything and they don't see him, so he gets up, finds Delia, tells her who's looking for her, tries to go to Vahal with her, but he rememebrs she's a Howler, and from there complications rise.

But, he's jsut been snowed in and frozen. He couldn't jsut get up.

Should I make him in the same situation and weather when he passed out, or what?

Trigger · « **Reply #173 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:26:54 am »

It didn't say he was SNOWED IN did it? He isn't burried alive or anything.

So, have the storm stop alittle bit AFTER he passes out, that way he doesn't get covered up and frozen to death.

THEN make Venra and such looking for Delia, she see's them coming, and She throws snow on Deccus to hide him from sight. Then, much like with an igloo, the insulation would keep him warm abit. THEN he digs his way out, and see's Vahal on the horizon, and makes it to the gate, passes out again from exhuation, and the guards pick him up and bring him in to the hospital.

Also, I have an idea. You know how I'm in there? (How could you NOT?) Well if something happens storywise, and I do something in it, you can ask me what I'd do. XD that way it would be more..."Authentic". :D

Swiftman · « **Reply #174 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:28:20 am »

Hmm... Yes, I like that idea of Delia covering Deccus up.... Yeah, that's good.

And I will. Before I do any Drifter activity done, I'll ask what you do first.

*EDIT*

Knall I'm tired... I'll stay up a bit more, but I won't last much longer....

Swiftman · « **Reply #175 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:38:07 am »

And.... i'm off to bed now. Night, peeps.

Tiger · « **Reply #176 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:41:09 am »

What? Running from the field of battle I see.

Coward!

Zaijian,
Tiger

Lazlo Falconi · « **Reply #177 on:** July 12, 2005, 05:43:03 am »

That's rather lame, Swift. Taking enituitve, being responsible.

Herb · « **Reply #178 on:** July 12, 2005, 11:31:10 am »

you could introduce ME and have Deccus wake up in a small cottage that i own

and i can nurse him and Delia back to health and then leave one day and never return (until later)

Lazlo Falconi · « **Reply #179 on:** July 12, 2005, 12:09:42 pm »

I don't think he wants to, Herb, because you live in the Southeast. Why don't you go shop at Publix or something?