Author Topic: A story I've worked on! (Read 120700 times)

Swiftman · « **Reply #150 on:** July 09, 2005, 08:56:16 am »

Wait for the next update on explanations for the full Lazlo picture. (I al ready checked it over with Falconi himself, and he likes it all. Next update of descriptions will explain it.)

And should I take out what text I have in Snowcraft and paste what you have, Trigger? I read through it and it looks fine, excluding Skull's forking you. (why would he have one anyways? Oh wait, it's Skull.....)

Trigger · « **Reply #151 on:** July 09, 2005, 04:52:24 pm »

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(why would he have one anyways? Oh wait, it's Skull.....)

Best. Explanation. Ever.

I think it WOULD be a little more like us.....But it seems alittle unrealistic for the time and place such things would be happining.

But I WOULD like to see me screaming "ZEELLLLLLOOOO" in a book. XD

Swiftman · « **Reply #152 on:** July 09, 2005, 04:59:40 pm »

So it shall be done. Zello would confuse Delia more than yee-ha anyways. I kinda wanted to add a Dukes of Hazzard spin to you guys, but now that I think of it, screw it. It wouldn't match you at all. Skull just doesn't fit that at all. And I can totally imagine Skull having a fork and some food with him at all times. Should I make him have just the fork, or have some food with him too?

Trigger · « **Reply #153 on:** July 09, 2005, 05:03:42 pm »

I think I would be the one with food with me all the time. XD

But now that I think of it...it would only confuse and enemy EVEN MORE, if somehow a plate of beans landed on their face. XD

Swiftman · « **Reply #154 on:** July 09, 2005, 05:08:28 pm »

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But now that I think of it...it would only confuse and enemy EVEN MORE, if somehow a plate of beans landed on their face. XD

Funniest stuff I read this week! Maybe you'll have a secret compartment under your ski-doo seat that has food in it, and Skull just has a fork because.... well, he's Skull.

Herb · « **Reply #155 on:** July 09, 2005, 06:19:59 pm »

haha nice work swift, i hadnt been able to read it earlier, but now i got the chance

everything is awesome too, you really are good at writing

is there going to be an explanantion of whole the golems function also?

Swiftman · « **Reply #156 on:** July 09, 2005, 06:47:14 pm »

No, but good idea, Herb. I'll have to explain that part... I usually just write the normal story, and do the explanations as I think of them. I'll have to work on that. Good idea's, Herby.

Herb · « **Reply #157 on:** July 09, 2005, 08:34:53 pm »

haha its actually "ideas", not "idea's"

but yea, i was wondering how wood and air tubes double your strength and whatnot

an alos, we should all find a 1 mile hill somewhere and have a picninc of death on it together

Kary · « **Reply #158 on:** July 09, 2005, 08:53:16 pm »

The Golem will be explained fully. Swift had it in his head and he explained it. It's simple, really. It's just an air hydralic system. Wait til the explanation gets finished.

Picnic of death.... Hmm.... I would dominate there. 2x4's reach farther than arms.

Pirate Cortez · « **Reply #159 on:** July 10, 2005, 01:15:57 pm »

Story gets a 10/10.

Herb · « **Reply #160 on:** July 10, 2005, 01:17:44 pm »

yaya it didnet get a Gannon Banned out of 10!

Pirate Cortez · « **Reply #161 on:** July 10, 2005, 01:20:40 pm »

GANNON-BANNED/10 is for stuff that sucks.

Trigger · « **Reply #162 on:** July 10, 2005, 02:22:16 pm »

Quote from: "Sir Kibble"

GANNON-BANNED/10 is for stuff that sucks.

Perhapes it should get a BURN-SIR-KIBBLE/10

Pirate Cortez · « **Reply #163 on:** July 10, 2005, 03:02:12 pm »

This story gets a GBD'S APPROVAL/10.

Herb · « **Reply #164 on:** July 10, 2005, 04:27:01 pm »

maybe it could also get a 75/91.456, with 75 being the best and 89.768245 being the worst and 1.00054 being average

its a weird score system, but it really helps people to know whats good and whats bad