Fan-Fic Idea

[MegaDaffy]

I've been thinking of doing a fan-fic on "MegaMan In The Moon" episode.
However, I don't know which idea works better.

Here are my Ideas:

1. I'd change the episode perspective to the girl's view (Yes, I know her name. I don't know if anyone else does).

2. The girl and her father go on another mission together (I'll add more if this works out).

3. What if.. Wily had sent the girl into space when holding her captive?

That's about it. Please leave an opinion on which one you think will work better. Thanks!

[MegaDaffy]

I'm going to try the 1st idea and see how it goes.

I couldn't wait to watch my father go into space. I was invited to the launch along with his professor, Dr.Light and his robots Mega Man and Roll.

I saw him in a cart going towards the shuttle. I ran up to him and hugged him, I told him to tell me when he got on the moon. He nodded and drove off. I didn't know why he did that, Dr. Light and Roll thought he was just nervous. I knew that wasn't it, MegaMan said he'd go check on it.

I decided to check it out myself. I climbed up the ladder and got into the shuttle that my dad was going to be in. I looked around, there was a whole lot of equipment. I saw someone coming and so I hid behind a box and waited for them to pass by. I tried to leave but the door had been locked shut.

"Uh Oh!" I said as I found I was going into space without the proper training my father had. I found a closet and tried to open it, but the shuttle had started to take off. Pretty soon, I was in space with some other mysterious person. I opened up the closet and found a spacesuit in there, I put it on and was surprised that it fit me perfectly. The helmet also fit my head as well. In a small drawer next to where the suit was I found what looked like an air tank. I snapped it on my back and inserted the hoses that were connected to it into the front of my suit.

I went to go find my father and hoped that we could get out of here.

I'll write more later...  

[Herb]

sounds good and all, but you HAVE to change your sentences so that EVERY ONE doesnt start with "I"

oh, and join the forum

[Jehuty]

You must join!!! All unregistered guests will be destroyed!!!

[Trigger]

Jehuty, you don't know how right you are dude.



^ Note: I made that LONG ago. And posted it here as a note to all unregistered guests. XD

[Herb]

yea youve posted it a bajillion times (but in a good way)

make another sprite where the usual forum goers kill everyone else

[Jehuty]

As you can see, MegaDaffy, we don't take very kindly to unregistered guests. If you don't register soon, TGBD will come and tear your lungs out and blast the heck out of you. Like in Trigger's comic mabober. Have a nice day. ^_^

[MegaDaffy]

O.K. I'll register! the only reason I didn't want to do that was because I didn't want to join and only have a few things to say. But I'll register and
the reason every sentence in my story was because this is in the girl's perspective.  

[MegaDaffy]

O.K. I'll register! the only reason I didn't want to do that was because I didn't want to join and only have a few things to say. But I'll register and
the reason every sentence in my story was because this is in the girl's perspective.  

O.K. I'm a member!

[Jehuty]

Yay!!!

[MegaDaffy]

I'm going to try the 1st idea and see how it goes.

I couldn't wait to watch my father go into space. I was invited to the launch along with his professor, Dr.Light and his robots Mega Man and Roll.

I saw him in a cart going towards the shuttle. I ran up to him and hugged him, I told him to tell me when he got on the moon. He nodded and drove off. I didn't know why he did that, Dr. Light and Roll thought he was just nervous. I knew that wasn't it, MegaMan said he'd go check on it.

I decided to check it out myself. I climbed up the ladder and got into the shuttle that my dad was going to be in. I looked around, there was a whole lot of equipment. I saw someone coming and so I hid behind a box and waited for them to pass by. I tried to leave but the door had been locked shut.

"Uh Oh!" I said as I found I was going into space without the proper training my father had. I found a closet and tried to open it, but the shuttle had started to take off. Pretty soon, I was in space with some other mysterious person. I opened up the closet and found a spacesuit in there, I put it on and was surprised that it fit me perfectly. The helmet also fit my head as well. In a small drawer next to where the suit was I found what looked like an air tank. I snapped it on my back and inserted the hoses that were connected to it into the front of my suit.

I went to go find my father and hoped that we could get out of here.

I'll write more later...  

As I ran towards where I thought my father was, I was still amazed that I could fit in this, I could even wear my glasses in my helmet.
When I got where three other robots were, I saw two people in spacesuits that were a lot a different than the one I found. I found out that it was my father and his teammate. I gave them a wave but ducked behind part of the structure because that other guy was coming. I overheard his plans, he wanted to use that lens that My father was going install in the laser to wreck havoc on earth. I couldn't believe what I heard. The shuttle then opened up and robots left, I hung onto what I was hiding behind to prevent being sucked out into space.

As soon as they landed, I went over to my father and tried to untie him. He asked me how I got on and where I found my suit.
I told him I climbed the ladder and got locked in and that I found a spare suit in the closet. I kept trying to untie him and his teammate, he told me to hurry up but someone came and I had to hide.

A robot with with scissors on his head cut the rope and told my father and his teammate to follow him....

Note: This is that Girl that was in the "Mega Man In The Moon" episode"speaking here, not me.  

Note: Sorry, that last post was me. I didn't realize I wasn't logged in.
If someone could that delete that one,Thanks!

[Crystalman]

I like the idea of the girls point of view. The idea that you would know the characters emotions on whats going on would be entertaining. Oh and welcome to the greatest forum in the world.

[MegaDaffy]

I'm going to try the 1st idea and see how it goes.

I couldn't wait to watch my father go into space. I was invited to the launch along with his professor, Dr.Light and his robots Mega Man and Roll.

I saw him in a cart going towards the shuttle. I ran up to him and hugged him, I told him to tell me when he got on the moon. He nodded and drove off. I didn't know why he did that, Dr. Light and Roll thought he was just nervous. I knew that wasn't it, MegaMan said he'd go check on it.

I decided to check it out myself. I climbed up the ladder and got into the shuttle that my dad was going to be in. I looked around, there was a whole lot of equipment. I saw someone coming and so I hid behind a box and waited for them to pass by. I tried to leave but the door had been locked shut.

"Uh Oh!" I said as I found I was going into space without the proper training my father had. I found a closet and tried to open it, but the shuttle had started to take off. Pretty soon, I was in space with some other mysterious person. I opened up the closet and found a spacesuit in there, I put it on and was surprised that it fit me perfectly. The helmet also fit my head as well. In a small drawer next to where the suit was I found what looked like an air tank. I snapped it on my back and inserted the hoses that were connected to it into the front of my suit.

I went to go find my father and hoped that we could get out of here.

I'll write more later...  

As I ran towards where I thought my father was, I was still amazed that I could fit in this, I could even wear my glasses in my helmet.
When I got where three other robots were, I saw two people in spacesuits that were a lot a different than the one I found. I found out that it was my father and his teammate. I gave them a wave but ducked behind part of the structure because that other guy was coming. I overheard his plans, he wanted to use that lens that My father was going install in the laser to wreck havoc on earth. I couldn't believe what I heard. The shuttle then opened up and robots left, I hung onto what I was hiding behind to prevent being sucked out into space.

As soon as they landed, I went over to my father and tried to untie him. He asked me how I got on and where I found my suit.
I told him I climbed the ladder and got locked in and that I found a spare suit in the closet. I kept trying to untie him and his teammate, he told me to hurry up but someone came and I had to hide.

A robot with with scissors on his head cut the rope and told my father and his teammate to follow him....

Note: This is that Girl that was in the "Mega Man In The Moon" episode"speaking here, not me.  

(*Sorry I thought I quoted that last part*)

I then exited the shuttle when I saw that man and his robots standing around my father and his teammate. I didn't want to go near them, so I tried to climb on top of the shuttle and see if I could see another opening to the space station we were at. I stood up trying to see but I lost my balance and fell off the shuttle. I was then floating in space, I    tried to move toward the space station. When I made it there, I grabbed on to the small poles that were along the space station and moved along them.

I finally made it in and saw the lens that my father was going to take and install at moon base. I then looked over and saw Mega Man knock out the robots that were standing around my father. I ran towards my father but that weird guy grabbed and held on tight. He threatened to push a button on my air tank that would send me into space alone. Mega Man then left and we had to follow this guy back into the room I was just in.

He commanded my father to unlock the protective barrier that was around the lens. I wanted to run but I knew that if I did, My father would be taken hostage again and I would be sent into space alone.
That guy grabbed me told my father that he had to go with him or else.
I was left there. I ran after my father but one of the robots that was walking in the shuttle threw something at me and knocked me down .

The shuttle took off as I yelled for my father. I stood up and didn't move I was alone in a space station I knew nothing about and in a spacesuit that I didn't know how to fully use. I saw Mega Man come back and land right next to me. He asked me if I was O.K., I said I was but that my father was forced to go with that guy. He told me not to worry but I couldn't, My father was with some weird guy that seemed to be bent on world domination and I couldn't help. That guy then came a screen in the room the lens was and said that he had placed a bomb somewhere that blow up the whole base, I felt horrible. I told Mega Man told this was my fault because I went on the shuttle and was spotted by him and used as a hostage. Mega Man told me that it wasn't a good time to place the blame on anyone.

Mega Man and I then ran towards the center of space station to call Dr. Light on earth and ask for backup. Before we got there he asked me if the spacesuit I was wearing fitted me well. I told him it did but that it was hard to turn my head in this helmet and that those hoses that were attached to my suit blocked some of my view on the sides of me.

When we made it there, MegaMan contacted the base and said we needed backup. They replied and said they would Roll and his dog Rush up to help. They also told us to look for the bomb in case they couldn't make it. Mega Man then told me to look for the bomb, which I did.      

[MegaDaffy]

I'm going to try the 1st idea and see how it goes.

I couldn't wait to watch my father go into space. I was invited to the launch along with his professor, Dr.Light and his robots Mega Man and Roll.

I saw him in a cart going towards the shuttle. I ran up to him and hugged him, I told him to tell me when he got on the moon. He nodded and drove off. I didn't know why he did that, Dr. Light and Roll thought he was just nervous. I knew that wasn't it, MegaMan said he'd go check on it.

I decided to check it out myself. I climbed up the ladder and got into the shuttle that my dad was going to be in. I looked around, there was a whole lot of equipment. I saw someone coming and so I hid behind a box and waited for them to pass by. I tried to leave but the door had been locked shut.

"Uh Oh!" I said as I found I was going into space without the proper training my father had. I found a closet and tried to open it, but the shuttle had started to take off. Pretty soon, I was in space with some other mysterious person. I opened up the closet and found a spacesuit in there, I put it on and was surprised that it fit me perfectly. The helmet also fit my head as well. In a small drawer next to where the suit was I found what looked like an air tank. I snapped it on my back and inserted the hoses that were connected to it into the front of my suit.

I went to go find my father and hoped that we could get out of here.

I'll write more later...  

As I ran towards where I thought my father was, I was still amazed that I could fit in this, I could even wear my glasses in my helmet.
When I got where three other robots were, I saw two people in spacesuits that were a lot a different than the one I found. I found out that it was my father and his teammate. I gave them a wave but ducked behind part of the structure because that other guy was coming. I overheard his plans, he wanted to use that lens that My father was going install in the laser to wreck havoc on earth. I couldn't believe what I heard. The shuttle then opened up and robots left, I hung onto what I was hiding behind to prevent being sucked out into space.

As soon as they landed, I went over to my father and tried to untie him. He asked me how I got on and where I found my suit.
I told him I climbed the ladder and got locked in and that I found a spare suit in the closet. I kept trying to untie him and his teammate, he told me to hurry up but someone came and I had to hide.

A robot with with scissors on his head cut the rope and told my father and his teammate to follow him....

Note: This is that Girl that was in the "Mega Man In The Moon" episode"speaking here, not me.  

(*Sorry I thought I quoted that last part*)

I then exited the shuttle when I saw that man and his robots standing around my father and his teammate. I didn't want to go near them, so I tried to climb on top of the shuttle and see if I could see another opening to the space station we were at. I stood up trying to see but I lost my balance and fell off the shuttle. I was then floating in space, I    tried to move toward the space station. When I made it there, I grabbed on to the small poles that were along the space station and moved along them.

I finally made it in and saw the lens that my father was going to take and install at moon base. I then looked over and saw Mega Man knock out the robots that were standing around my father. I ran towards my father but that weird guy grabbed and held on tight. He threatened to push a button on my air tank that would send me into space alone. Mega Man then left and we had to follow this guy back into the room I was just in.

He commanded my father to unlock the protective barrier that was around the lens. I wanted to run but I knew that if I did, My father would be taken hostage again and I would be sent into space alone.
That guy grabbed me told my father that he had to go with him or else.
I was left there. I ran after my father but one of the robots that was walking in the shuttle threw something at me and knocked me down .

The shuttle took off as I yelled for my father. I stood up and didn't move I was alone in a space station I knew nothing about and in a spacesuit that I didn't know how to fully use. I saw Mega Man come back and land right next to me. He asked me if I was O.K., I said I was but that my father was forced to go with that guy. He told me not to worry but I couldn't, My father was with some weird guy that seemed to be bent on world domination and I couldn't help. That guy then came a screen in the room the lens was and said that he had placed a bomb somewhere that blow up the whole base, I felt horrible. I told Mega Man told this was my fault because I went on the shuttle and was spotted by him and used as a hostage. Mega Man told me that it wasn't a good time to place the blame on anyone.

Mega Man and I then ran towards the center of space station to call Dr. Light on earth and ask for backup. Before we got there he asked me if the spacesuit I was wearing fitted me well. I told him it did but that it was hard to turn my head in this helmet and that those hoses that were attached to my suit blocked some of my view on the sides of me.

When we made it there, MegaMan contacted the base and said we needed backup. They replied and said they would Roll and his dog Rush up to help. They also told us to look for the bomb in case they couldn't make it. Mega Man then told me to look for the bomb, which I did.        

MegaMan also told the other people there to look for the bomb as well. I looked everywhere for the bomb that my father's kidnapper planted.
I looked in the control room, the entrance, even outside in space. It wasn't anywhere to be found. I then looked under one of the floor panels and didn't find it either. MegaMan got worried knowing the bomb would explode soon. We overheard a worker at the space station say that someone had just landed on the landing pad. MegaMan told me to follow him. I ran as fast as I could, I knew I could run faster but my suit was slowing me down a bit. When I finally caught up to MegaMan, Roll and his dog Rush were there. However, Rush didn't look too good. I asked what was wrong with him and Roll said he was Space-sick. MegaMan began to worry more knowing that Rush wouldn't be at the best of his abilities. I'll write more later....